Wild clouds dancing
Free-rhyme embraces my soul
Beyond horizons
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Water carving peace
Slicing salty expanses
Leaving quietude
*
Navigating dusk
Beneath uncharted stars to
Free destinations
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Natureโs sea canvas
Catching whisps of ocean breeze
My solace, my home
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Words used:
Wild, Clouds, Dancing, Free, Rhyme, Embrace, Horizon, Water, Carving, Peace, Slicing, Salty, Expanse, Leaving, Quietude, Navigating, Dusk, Beneath, Uncharted, Stars, Destination, Sea, Canvas, Catching, Whisps, Ocean, Breeze, Solace, Home
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For Randy Baker's Prompted #5 challenge.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (18)
Beautiful! Perfect title for the mood captured in your haiku poemsโฆ the sea has a similar effect on me!๐
I feel so peaceful now ๐
THis is so lovely and calm, but not in a still, dead way, in a accepting, connecting way.
I love that you chose this Haiku style - I never even considered this! Really well done Cathy ๐๐โฅ๏ธ
Lovely work! I love your incorporation of nature into your work.
Love that you created a haiku story for this challenge! All the ocean and sky imagery using the words lended very well to the form!
Love where you took this challenge. Always enjoy reading your writing!
I can feel the ocean breeze, see the stars and feel the wonder of creation. Lovely.
Whoaaaa, you used so many words!! I used only 10 from two of Poppy's Prompts about a few weeks ago and I'm still exhausted, lol. You're so freaking amazing! Queen for a reason! Loved your beautiful set of Haikus!
Wonderful Haikus Cathy! โบ๏ธ๐
A lovely work by you!
Perfect. Could feel a sense of calmness wash over me. Great stuff.
Holy cow did you use a lot of words!! That was quite beautiful, my friend :)
Wonderful and loving it!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
How I wish my home felt calm right now. I love this Cathy, it reminds me to put the love back into my home.
Cathy, I live on the Gulf of Mexico and you captured the feeling perfectly!! Good luck in the challenge!
What breathtaking imagery and sensory elements in this haiku Cathy!! I especially enjoyed the stanza "Water carving peace Slicing salty expanses Leaving quietude"... I felt like I could taste the salt on my tongue and hear the silence ringing after the rise of the waves crashing ended. Great work!!
What a lovely piece, Cathy! It soothes my soul.