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Spacetime

Abecedarian poem about spacetime

By Mohammed DarasiPublished about a month ago โ€ข 1 min read
Top Story - January 2024
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Spacetime
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Aloof

Backstabbing and disappearing. Poof!

Congealing around existence

Demise-rearing movement is persistent

Everlasting and ever looming insistence

For resolution

Godly powers providing us with pittance

Humdrum living until deliverance

Infinite loops with consistence

Jostling intent with coincidence

Knocking down perseverance

Longing for chaos and immanence

Majesty shrouding the universe

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Nonconforming

Obliging and welcoming

Potential shifts are foretelling

Quakes, quasars and quickening

Rate of expansion is deafening

Stripes of it bear lightening

Treading through and siphoning

Unearthing secrets so stifling

Voluminous and frightening

Writhe with the unknown, co-piloting

Xeric, expansive and maddening

Yet majestic and mind-boggling

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Zebrine coexistence life coddling

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About the Creator

Mohammed Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/

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  • Rubyabout a month ago

    this was great!

  • Catherine Dorianabout a month ago

    This felt momentous, as if each line contributed to a crescendo until the speaker resolves that space, which they've been describing for twenty-five lines, is, in the end, boggling to the human mind. Brilliant approach.

  • Mustafizur Rahmanabout a month ago

    Nice Share! Thank you, Author

  • sleepy draftsabout a month ago

    This is so beautiful and well done. I loved, "Everlasting and ever looming insistence" - gorgeous!

  • Naveed about a month ago

    Bravo! Your hard work is paying offโ€”keep it up, congratulations!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a month ago

    CoZmic. Nice.

  • C. H. Richardabout a month ago

    I like the word Zebrine! Nice take on the challenge ๐Ÿ‘ โค๏ธ

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a month ago

    Space-time is a great subject for a poem and you tackled it so well. Congratulations on your TS and good luck with the challenge

  • Neha Poddarabout a month ago

    Hi can you please help me actually I write a poem but I don't know how to upload on vocal can you please tell me and in my poem I 125 words so it is eligible or not

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Hey there. Congrats on the TS.

  • L.C. Schรคferabout a month ago

    I am loving the lines people come up with for X and Z! This is wonderful, good luck in the challenge ๐Ÿ‘

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a month ago

    Mohammed! This is next level, my friend! I love every line and the symbolism weaved in! Congrats on a very well deserved top story and a phenomenal entry to the challenge!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    Very deep , great entry

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a month ago

    Wow! This is fantastic. There's a lot of symbolism and depth. Great job, Mohammed

  • Stephanie Hoogstadabout a month ago

    Great job. The entry is very rhythmic with beautiful imagery.

  • Celia in Underlandabout a month ago

    Beautiful entry -loved the contradictory depiction of space with all its mysteries. Perfectly captured ๐Ÿค

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, I learned two new words today; zebrine and quasar! Loved your Abecedarian!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Great entry. Well done.

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    Great subject and a great job of conveying its mystery in this format, Mohammed! Looks to me like a Top Story and a real contender for the challenge!

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