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Sorcerer's Moon

Tonight's the Night

By Dana CrandellPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2023
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Sorcerer's Moon - ©Dana O. Crandell

Whispered incantations cast

In darkened, secret rooms

Will linger 'til this night has passed,

And Morning Glory blooms.

__________________________

Familiars will prowl darkened streets

In search of those who call,

While from the alleys, low drum beats

Enrapture and enthrall.

__________________________

Cold flesh will tingle, hairs will stand

And unseen hands caress

As long-enamored souls demand

To be allowed ingress.

__________________________

Powers black and powers white

Will battle for their goals,

Leaving in their wake the plight

Of unsuspecting souls.

__________________________

Flames will flicker, fires burn bright

While victors claim their prizes.

Be wary, friend, for on this night

The Sorcerer's Moon rises.

***

This one was inspired by one of my moon photos. On Friday, September 13, 2019, we had a very rare occurrence, as the Harvest Moon fell on Friday the 13th, making it a Sorcerer's Moon, said to have power for those who know how to use it. I'm not particularly superstitious, but it's an intriguing enough subject to write a poem about.

This is a cropped version of a photo taken from my driveway, a few minutes after the moon rose behind a thin layer of clouds. Yes, it was this yellow, and yes, it appeared this flat. The 13" x 19" print has been one of my best sellers, particularly around Halloween.

Thanks for reading!

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About the Creator

Dana Crandell

Dad, Stedpad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd. Content writer by trade. Vocal Creator by choice.

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  • Chloe Gilholy6 months ago

    This was a brilliant read

  • I Remember This One 😉👍📝😁Good To Read Again♥️✌️

  • Novel Allen7 months ago

    That pic was awesome. Great story on this one. Old but still new.

  • Veronica Coldiron8 months ago

    OOOH! This was awesome! I know why it got a Top Story!! LOVED this one!!

  • This was very beautiful! ❤️ Thank you for sharing this with me!

  • Veronica Stone12 months ago

    Beautifully written, so evocative.

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Such gorgeous writing & photography! Phenomenal work!

  • Mr Blackyabout a year ago

    wow

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Wow , very magical

  • Dylan about a year ago

    Very interesting. Great poem!

  • Talia Devoraabout a year ago

    Interesting poem. I love dark poetry, so this was a fantastic read, plus I learned something new! In return for your amazing work, please check out my excerpt for my second poetry book! https://vocal.media/poets/come-check-out-this-sneak-peak-before-buying-my-second-poetry-debut-scrapbook

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Woah! I had no idea such conditions would bring about something so mysterious as a Sorcerer's Moon. Thank you for this intriguing tidbit and wonderous poem. Well done!

  • Devyn Sharelabout a year ago

    Gorgeous shot of the moon! And a great poem. Congrats on your top story!

  • Harmony Kentabout a year ago

    Fantastic photo and poem! A very well deserved Top Story. Love it, Dana 💕🙂

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    This paired so perfectly with that amazing photo of yours! Just the right amount of spooky. Wonderful work. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Shannon Loewenabout a year ago

    Great rhythm and rhyme! Also - what an amazing photo!! No wonder it's a best seller :)

  • Aphoticabout a year ago

    This is really good! Flows wonderfully and goes so well with the beautiful photo! Great job on both.

  • Reviewsabout a year ago

    Amazing sight indeed!

  • Li Maabout a year ago

    Really amazing,, congratulations on top story!!

  • Muhammad Naveedabout a year ago

    beautiful

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    Love the photo and the poem -- it almost reads like a spell! 🌝

  • Anonymous Shadowsabout a year ago

    Engaging and unsettling horror poem, with evocative words and effective rhyme!

  • Abdul Azizabout a year ago

    super

  • Scorpionabout a year ago

    Awesome👏Congrats on top story!!

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