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Sleep Stories

sand seas

By MegPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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Sleep Stories
Photo by Jerome on Unsplash

Sleep summons strange stories.

Sailors sailing sand seas,

Searching, singing, scavenging.

Seeking sacred stones,

Scarcely seen.

Secret saga.

Some sleepy seer’s story.

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Thanks for reading! This is for the tautogram challenge :)

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Meg

I'm here to explore the depth of human experience and to stop procrastinating my passion.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Robbie Cheadle2 months ago

    This is excellent. Well done.

  • John M Edwards Jr2 months ago

    Really good.

  • Shannon Loewen2 months ago

    Splendid seeing someone sharing sleep stories! ;)

  • Muhammad Naveed2 months ago

    Good Too Good here is one you may like https://vocal.media/poets/sensual-sway

  • Ash Taylor2 months ago

    Love it!

  • PK Colleran2 months ago

    Well done! 💐

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Nice rhyme,

  • Malik Umar Awan2 months ago

    Nice

  • Poppy the Poet2 months ago

    This is awesome!

  • D-Donohoe2 months ago

    Superb!

  • Kelly Robertson2 months ago

    Great job! Congrats on your top story!

  • Dylan 2 months ago

    Very well written!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    very nicely done. Congrats on the Top story.

  • Madison Newton2 months ago

    Reminded me of The Land Before Time, all the dinosaurs always referred to dreams as sleep stories. Nicely written!

  • Em Starr2 months ago

    This is gorgeous, Meg! Such wonderful imagery!

  • Kristen Balyeat2 months ago

    Very nice! Congrats on top story- love it!

  • J. S. Wade2 months ago

    Oooooo. New category. Word Master. Love it 🥰

  • Bradley Wisnoski2 months ago

    This story made me do a spunky splurge seasoning in some stocky sockies!!!

  • Jess2 months ago

    Lovely wordplay and rhyme in this one! Love your take on the challenge.

  • Nice one❤️✨😉Congratulations🎉

  • Carly Bush2 months ago

    Love it! Very well done.

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    Superb!

  • Neena2 months ago

    Very nice

  • It's a great tautogram poem. I can't even think about this. Congrats.

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