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Sleep Stories

sand seas

By MegPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2023
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Sleep Stories
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Sleep summons strange stories.

Sailors sailing sand seas,

Searching, singing, scavenging.

Seeking sacred stones,

Scarcely seen.

Secret saga.

Some sleepy seer’s story.

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Thanks for reading! This is for the tautogram challenge :)

surreal poetry
68

About the Creator

Meg

I'm here to explore the depth of human experience and to stop procrastinating my passion.

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Comments (36)

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  • Robbie Cheadleabout a year ago

    This is excellent. Well done.

  • John M Edwards Jrabout a year ago

    Really good.

  • Shannon Loewenabout a year ago

    Splendid seeing someone sharing sleep stories! ;)

  • Muhammad Naveedabout a year ago

    Good Too Good here is one you may like https://vocal.media/poets/sensual-sway

  • Ash Taylorabout a year ago

    Love it!

  • PK Colleranabout a year ago

    Well done! 💐

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Nice rhyme,

  • Malik Umar Awanabout a year ago

    Nice

  • Poppy about a year ago

    This is awesome!

  • D-Donohoeabout a year ago

    Superb!

  • Kelly Robertsonabout a year ago

    Great job! Congrats on your top story!

  • Dylan about a year ago

    Very well written!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    very nicely done. Congrats on the Top story.

  • Madison Newtonabout a year ago

    Reminded me of The Land Before Time, all the dinosaurs always referred to dreams as sleep stories. Nicely written!

  • Testabout a year ago

    This is gorgeous, Meg! Such wonderful imagery!

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    Very nice! Congrats on top story- love it!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Oooooo. New category. Word Master. Love it 🥰

  • Bradley Wisnoskiabout a year ago

    This story made me do a spunky splurge seasoning in some stocky sockies!!!

  • Jessabout a year ago

    Lovely wordplay and rhyme in this one! Love your take on the challenge.

  • Nice one❤️✨😉Congratulations🎉

  • Carly Bushabout a year ago

    Love it! Very well done.

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Superb!

  • Neenaabout a year ago

    Very nice

  • Manpreet Singh Bhinderabout a year ago

    It's a great tautogram poem. I can't even think about this. Congrats.

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