skimming
#poem-every-once-in-awhile
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a slight propulsion,
a division of stakes,
to chance the landing
becomes a question delayed,
skimming lazily o'er
still glass,
a smudge of reflection
captured in the moment,
that liminal space
when tensions reach
and winds resist,
margins blur
while willowy limbs
tease the surface,
to rest or take flight?
A decision made
with caution
yet just beneath
a shadow stirs
ever slight,
a trick of the light perhaps.
instincts call
for patience yet
hunger cries the loudest
and so the innocent
remains unaware
to the end,
swallowed in one sigh of
an upturned mouth.
the dance is over,
for now.
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Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. It’s evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay
Oh, an upturned mouth... Not where I thought this was going. Wonderful poem. Congratulations on Top Story!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
You always write such elegant poetry. This is no different! I loved this! Congrats on the Top Story!
I loved this!
Beautiful, from start to finish! Congratulations!
Oh I hoped he'd flit away...
loved it so much dear♥️
Heather, this is such a beautiful dance of words you wrote, the contrast of life and the inevitable end is but a moment in time. you captured the harmony of nature. I was spellbound. Congratulations
congrats on TS. I love taking photos of flowers and now and then, I can catch a butterfly, dragon fly, or bee land to drink its nectar. Now, I'll also have a new perspective on nature. Thank you for opening my eyes a bit wider. This was GREAT.
😊 This feels airborne. Such a light touch to it.. if that makes sense?
There you go. Congrats on the TS.
Gorgeous work as always, you’re a true poetess
Oh, pretty pretty...love the image - Your Canva skills are out in full force and love the use of liminal! Congrats to Top Story!
Love the imagery
Love the imagery and brutal reality of the ending. I just love your poetry.
"ever slight, a trick of the light perhaps. instincts call" I most liked those 3 lines. Well done Hubler.
Hunger cries the loudest. It sure does. Loved your poem so much!
Beautifully written, and a lesson to be learned to never get too comfortable in your surroundings. Excellent job, my friend.
Beautiful nature poem!!! Love it!¡💕❤️❤️
Oh this is breathtaking! Really beautiful word choice and imagery! Loved “a smudge of reflection captured in the moment”
The imagery of the delicate dance between the dragonfly and its surroundings was beautifully captured. Your words evoke a serene yet poignant moment, reflecting on the fleeting nature of life and the choices we make. The tension and eventual resolution in the poem were masterfully done, leaving a lasting impression. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece. I look forward to reading more of your work!
I truly love this delicate glimpse into softer parts of your nature and the world in a sweet moment. Beautiful piece!
Did you create the pic, Heather? It is astonishing beautiful! Loved the sense of living and acting in the moment and the evocation of life’s frailty in an uncertain world in your beautiful poem.
Love the dragonfly and your poem evoked it beautifully