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Silver Lining

James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza - #5: You’ve Got Mail

By Cendrine MarrouatPublished 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
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Photo credit: Zorro4 via Pixabay

Silver Lining

Every cloud has a silver lining.

In the moonlight,

tears still flow—

some might linger.

(Maybe hating is better.)

Your smile

delaying its course

across the Milky Way.

(Maybe comfort is better.)

Your voice

in thousand pieces

along the mountain path.

(Maybe listening is better.)

Still here,

the slow release

of pain.

(Maybe clinging is better.)

At dawn,

among new shadows

your old letters.

(Maybe it was all for a reason.)

Remember:

The silver lining lies

in your heart,

always.

©2023 Cendrine Marrouat

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I wrote this poem in response to James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza. I was tagged to participate in the fifth challenge of the series.

Theme: "You’ve Got Mail! Challenge: start a story/poem with the last line of an email or letter you recently received."

The line that starts my poem comes from a friend's email I received a little while ago.

Check out all the prompts and rules below.

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Cendrine Marrouat is a writer, photographer, podcaster, blogger, anthology editor, and the co-founder of Auroras & Blossoms and A Warm Cup of Cozy. She has authored and co-authored more than 40 books, including The Train: A Short Story (2023), In Her Own Words: A Collection of Short Stories & Flashku (2022), After the Fires of Day: Haiku Inspired by Kahlil Gibran & Alphonse de Lamartine (2021), Rhythm Flourishing: A Collection of Kindku and Sixku (2020), Walks: A Collection of Haiku (2019-2020), and In the Silence of Words: A Three-Act Play (2018).

Cendrine's work has appeared in many publications. She is the creator of the Sixku, Flashku, Sepigram, and Reminigram; as well as the co-creator of the Kindku, Pareiku, Vardhaku, and Hemingku.

Website: https://creativeramblings.com

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About the Creator

Cendrine Marrouat

Writer & Author⎜Photographer⎜Artist⎜Co-founder of Auroras & Blossoms / A Warm Mug of Cozy⎜(Co-)creator of literary forms

"The Train: A Short Story" is out!

Website: https://creativeramblings.com

Donations: https://ko-fi.com/cendrineartist

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  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    Beautiful

  • Teresa Renton9 months ago

    Love the gentle rhythm of introspection and slow release of pain over time (at least that's how I understood it), beautiful x

  • Tiffany Gordon 9 months ago

    Beautifully done!

  • Ashley Lima9 months ago

    Gosh, I love this one a lot. I have to agree with Leslie, the structure of this poem is stellar!

  • Leslie Writes9 months ago

    I love both the sentiment and the structure of this poem. Well crafted 💖

  • Beautiful message. Well written!!!

  • The Dani Writer9 months ago

    Awesome challenge prompt and cool piece of work Cendrine!

  • Grz Colm9 months ago

    Cendrine, I love your tone here and the quiet simplicity! What a unique challenge! 😊

  • James U. Rizzi9 months ago

    How beautiful is this, very somber and uplifting at the same time I’d admire its inviting calm

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Oneg In The Arctic9 months ago

    This is written so beautiful, great job 😁

  • Sian N. Clutton9 months ago

    Lovely poem!

  • Such a wonderful poem! I loved it!

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler9 months ago

    Cendrine, I am always such a clunk in not understanding most poetry, but this is so beautiful, I understood it immediately and love it! Of course, if Jazzy and Babs liked it, I knew I would, too!!!

  • Jazzy 9 months ago

    Ah so beautiful 💕💕

  • Babs Iverson9 months ago

    Brilliant & beautiful!!! Cendrine, loved your silver lining poem!!!

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