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Seven Minutes Weren't Heaven

Some things Are Better with the Lights On

By Jennifer DavidPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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Seven Minutes Weren't Heaven
Photo by Ivan Aleksic on Unsplash

My first kiss missed, twice

A brace, a face, a smack--Ack!

Least he lied, "was nice"

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Jennifer David

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  • Heather Hubler4 months ago

    Aww, well at least he was nice about it! Good one :)

  • Stephanie David4 months ago

    Good writing. This piece triggers reflection on awkward firsts.

  • Awww, he was so sweet to do that. Lol. Loved your Senryu!

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