scratches in my mind - passion
Another thought-provoking, inspirational senryu for all!
are our hearts and minds
opposing forces, intuned;
misled by passion?
*
guided by passion
intuned, opposing forces;
our hearts and minds are
*
Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: This is another in an unintentional series I've been working on of thought-provoking and inspirational senryu that was kicked started by the one at the link below.
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (9)
Oh wowww, it's kinda like a Palindrome but not exactly a Palindrome. Maybe it's a Paulitical Palindrome hehehehehe 🍩🥐
I love this! You've been experimenting lately with some really impactful formatting and I'm LIVING for it!!!
Love the mirror meaning. Interesting project you have going on here. Like to.see where it goes.
Saving time by including the oppositional poem from jump street? But we all know how your mind works, don’t we. Tomorrow you’ll have another one that we won’t see coming!
Love the mirror effect of this! Cleverly done!
Hmmmm... Maybe... Yeah, well, okay, spot on! Well writ, sir!
Yes, I believe you're right-both times.
I like the flip! 👍😁
Yes! All of the above. You know how to make a person think. Great piece ☺️