Sa Ta Na Ma
breathe in again
Two-dimensional
you breathed in a new world
became Mobius
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And we drank of you
all nectar sweet and divine
still, your cup runneth
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For Time guides us all
back to dust from whence we came
there is a season
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Phoenix-bound for West
when the flames fade past purple
you breathe in again
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