Ring Pop
A free verse poem. This poem is dedicated to one of my best friends!
The day
I put you
on my finger
was the sweetest day
of my life.
The day
you became
my Strawberry-Watermelon flavoured Ring Pop
was the day
I received
the most indulgent treat
for free.
Since that sunny,
swimming pool-blue skied,
halcyon camp day
we shook hands,
and smiled with grace,
I’ve kept
you on my finger
and never
discarded you.
Since I was
in the middle of nowhere,
Ontario,
I didn’t have access
to a local candy shop.
You will forever
be cherished,
my sweet treat,
because
you are treacly,
sticky,
colourful,
and decadent
like a Ring Pop.
Thank you,
once again
for this free gift
you gifted me
that day.
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Talia Devora
Poetess, visual artist and lifestyle/quiz writer! My pastimes include reading, sleeping, gaming, music, fitness, etc! Be yourselves, be kind and value life! Let's connect and be friends!
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Comments (9)
Beautiful work! What a Yummy Muse!
Talia, this is so sweet and nice! Well done.
Lovely poem...now I want a ring pop
Great poem!! I loved it. 😍
't' ~ "Thanks" ~ What a unique style of 'one-lining' you've developed...People recognize the way we present with our own personalities and 'different' is always in. If you've ever read any of my 'Shorts'...Take a minute and check out my "Billy"...I think you'll see we all have our ways to present....to our audience ~ I like yours ~ HadaNuff 'j' in l.a
That is so sweet. Well done.
't' ~ Just lovely ~ "Grace"...my Biggie. 'j'
I remember ring pop! Great work! 💖💜❤️
Sweet and sentimental... I love it...