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Ring Pop

A free verse poem. This poem is dedicated to one of my best friends!

By Talia DevoraPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Photo retrieved from Google Images

The day

I put you

on my finger

was the sweetest day

of my life.

The day

you became

my Strawberry-Watermelon flavoured Ring Pop

was the day

I received

the most indulgent treat

for free.

Since that sunny,

swimming pool-blue skied,

halcyon camp day

we shook hands,

and smiled with grace,

I’ve kept

you on my finger

and never

discarded you.

Since I was

in the middle of nowhere,


I didn’t have access

to a local candy shop.

You will forever

be cherished,

my sweet treat,


you are treacly,



and decadent

like a Ring Pop.

Thank you,

once again

for this free gift

you gifted me

that day.

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Talia Devora

Poetess, visual artist and lifestyle/quiz writer! My pastimes include reading, sleeping, gaming, music, fitness, etc! Be yourselves, be kind and value life! Let's connect and be friends!

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  • Tiffany Gordon 13 days ago

    Beautiful work! What a Yummy Muse!

  • Manisha Dhalani2 months ago

    Talia, this is so sweet and nice! Well done.

  • Matthew Mccahey2 months ago

    Lovely poem...now I want a ring pop

  • Ashley Shiflett2 months ago

    Great poem!! I loved it. 😍

  • Jay Kantor2 months ago

    't' ~ "Thanks" ~ What a unique style of 'one-lining' you've developed...People recognize the way we present with our own personalities and 'different' is always in. If you've ever read any of my 'Shorts'...Take a minute and check out my "Billy"...I think you'll see we all have our ways to present....to our audience ~ I like yours ~ HadaNuff 'j' in l.a

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    That is so sweet. Well done.

  • Jay Kantor2 months ago

    't' ~ Just lovely ~ "Grace"...my Biggie. 'j'

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    I remember ring pop! Great work! 💖💜❤️

  • Sweet and sentimental... I love it...

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