You sit in the corner, like a Cyclops
With your one staring eye, white and clinical.
Crusty drips spill from the top left drawer
And lint has gathered there,
Like ants to a fallen food piece.
There is a small darkness on your lower lip
Which suggests mould forming,
Or dirt crumbs congregating, or grains of sand.
You look unkempt and unloved,
Surrounded by the scatterings and detritus
Of smelly humans.
But it is hard to view you as a monster
When you are so helpful.
Like a hunched henchman in a horror film,
You loyally do my bidding without hesitation.
You regularly open up your perspex mouth
To my dirty laundry,
And I close it in so that you can't spit it out,
With a clunk and a click.
Churning my denims, swishing underpants and shirts
And foaming up socks,
Occasionally devouring one as payment for services.
It is a small price to pay for smooth, ungnarly hands.
*
I think about what life would be like without you-
Look into the past before your arrival,
And shudder.
Standing in fast moving water, chilled,
Balancing on slippery stones, foot curving to their surface.
Desperately gripping.
Using rocks for scrubbers and their big brother boulders
For draping, to dry.
I picture myself as a servant, carting loads of linens
To the wash house. It will take me all day.
My hands will be hideous, raw and sore.
Bright, bright magenta.
I will have rubbed and pummelled and plunged:
Harsh chemicals will have coated my skin
And my back! Oh, my back!
It will ache with the strain and the vigour
Needed to clean the Master's sheets.
Twisted into rope cord to rid them of drops,
Hands tight and throbbing from the strain.
Such a process from scrubbing, to the mangle,
To the lynching of items on the line,
Hanging like sails, trying to wrench themselves free
From their tether. I will sleep well
But not enough to rid me of my aches;
Only enough to calm them.
*
They are arduous images
And I give thanks for technology.
My washer is a treasure,
A time machine.
It gives me the gift of hours.
*
I sit and listen to it whirr and twirl and hum,
The clothes drenched and turning
Round and round,
Like a liberated prisoner in the rain
On release:
Soaked, cleansed, renewed.
It doesn't like towels, I know;
They make it grind and groan
Like an engine up steep terrain
But it is diligent, my minion,
And finishes the job
Without spillage or grumble.
*
I am grateful for what it gives me.
It seems only right to show appreciation
For something which takes so much away,
Deals with it efficiently and waits patiently for you to notice.
Just a small beep, like a squeak from a pet mouse
To let you know its job is done.
No fuss, just dutiful completion.
I couldn't live (well) without it.
*
Machine, I thank you.
Thank you for the drudgery.
Thank you for the time.
I am in your debt.
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Comments (5)
Awesome
So much love for the beast! 😆 I enjoyed your ode Rachel! 😊
Its always a sock isnt it 🤔 Why is it always a sock? I heard that depression rates went up after washing machines were in every home. Because women were more isolated at home and not meeting at the river to wash and gossip... and that ritual wasnt replaced by something else. Maybe the cost is more than just a sock after all 😁
I think we're all in debt to them! I shudder too when I think about the times before washing machines. Beautiful ode!
As are we all. Thanks for sharing this piece. Fun! Some great imagery here, too.