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My Saddest Poem

Am I forbidden?

By Mariann CarrollPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Forbidden Lullaby video by Derek Fiechter’s Music

I was meant to be Love but not really

Instead I was abused.

I was meant to be a winner

Never won a single Challenge, Author we are loving

Or Top story.

I was meant to have a lot of children ,

I just got one that was taken away.

I was meant to be healthy and safe,

Bad car accident , they took my kidney away.

I just been in and out of the hospital.

I was meant to be rich ,

They stole my money that was meant for me.

Need a home to call my own.

Need a lover that loves me for being just me.

Need to be healthy , surgeries not needed no more.

Need my family always by my side.

Need unlimited Cash at my beck and call.

Need to be enough just for me …….

( I hope you listen to the music while you read my poem. I love Gothic music. It tell my true story or should I not listen to them cause I feel the dark side of life instead the light within. ) This is a sad poem is it forbidden,too?

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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Lightning Boltabout a year ago

    ❤️ed! God Bless You and Yours! 💕💕

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Very well written! I hope things improve quickly. Sending hugs your way my talented friend!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    This is a Top Story in my estimation! Sorry Vocal missed it. Fantastic and loving it@!!💖💕

  • I'm so sorry that these happened to you. I love you as an Author, your stories are always Top for me and you're always a challenge winner in my eyes. You're a kind and beautiful soul. And I wish you to have eternal health, wealth and happiness. And the Forbidden Lullaby is so calming and beautiful! Thank you so much for introducing me to gothic music!

  • Love this and parts of it resonate with this recent one of mine, and thank you for the shout out in your origina post https://vocal.media/poets/if-two?via=mike

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    Yes you were meant for all that and more my friend.

  • Deasun T. Smythabout a year ago

    I read this with the music, it really blended. God bless.

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