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My Heaven

Love Poem Inspired by Picture

By Haley M.T.Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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My Heaven
Photo by Jay Patel on Unsplash

Along this winding path we trek,

as the dawn's light breaks through the tree's

and seeps through the morning fog,

I am met with a revelation.

Just like Gabriel had appeared to Mary,

and beckoned "Be not afraid,"

You have appeared into my life,

and beckoned the same with open arms.

You who is knelt upon the earth,

not in prayer but to rest,

and yet still retain,

that peaceful reverence.

You who tripped amongst the roots one moment,

and walked with the grace of angels the next,

with nary the thought or worry of judgement,

for there is none to judge but the trees.

You who states that you are simply plain,

yet with the sunlight warming your cheek,

and enveloping you in its ethereal glow,

I cannot help but think of you as perfect.

Along this winding path we trek,

as you raise from your dirt covered knees

and beckon us to continue down the trail,

I am met with a revelation.

I have found my Heaven.

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Haley M.T.

I'm just a simple day-to-day writer just trying to get by in life. No grand past or achievements, simply a Jill-of-Some-Trades enjoying a hobby.

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  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!!

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    Living in sync with nature, a touching piece that makes ne appreciate the beauty that surrounds me more.

  • A. Lenae2 months ago

    You really captured the overall peace and harmony that comes with finding one's own place within nature and in falling in step with/understanding someone else. Lovely piece.

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    Your stories are very beautiful

  • sleepy drafts2 months ago

    Oh my goodness, this is so stunning. I was entranced all the way through. Your poem has such a beautiful flow and warmth to it and ends on such a sweet note. Gorgeous work. Congratulations on Top Story!! 💗

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Dare I say, heavenly. Well done and congrats on the TS.

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 months ago

    Such a beautifully crafted piece, with a lovely revelation at the end! Congrats on the top story :)

  • Toby Heward2 months ago

    Short and sweet, nice

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