Mundane
Thoughts of a girl who finally made it to 20
My ideal life
Has fog and orange leaves
Because that's my ideal autumn
Early morning coffee,
Wearing a cream sweater
With my honey in dress pants
And a child eating cheerios,
Her backpack is on the barstool next to her
It's a picket fence,
To a green yard where
my dog and my son play catch
And I grow tomatoes and pumpkins
And my lazy college cat lays on the window sill
Watching the birds and falling leaves
Her age apparent from the snow-colored fur on her face
I dream about this life
Mundane
Normal
I don't fear usual
Although I once did.
Thinking you are going to die before 20
Makes you wish for usual
Normal
Mundane.
I am finally 20,
And I finally hope that
I live longer.
Longer to 50
Or even 75,
With my bones more rickety
And my daughter telling me to lay off the sodium as
Her daughter plays in my living room,
As I reminisce to her mother how
My daughter used to play with that same doll
When she was a little girl,
Eating cheerios at my counter
As I got ready for work,
And my children's father,
Now old,
No longer in dress pants
Sits in his “spot”
An old recliner chair,
Talking to my son and his son
About a game
Or the weather
Or his old pal
My ideal life is a family I built for myself
The ability and belief to live past 15
A warm, cozy house
In a dual-income household
So my children never worry
And my parents don't have to buy them necessities for Christmas
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Speaks powerfully and eloquently to the worth of a "normal," life. Too few people seem to acknowledge it these days. Well done.