Silky, soft hands stroke my hair…
Mildly hairy, flat chest comforts me…
On your stomach is where I sleep best.
Ocean sounds play in the background.
Tickling me is such a sweet tease.
Holding me makes me weak to my knees.
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The last time I laughed so hard that my belly hurt was ___________ Rupi Kaur's Gratitude Writing Prompts When I was 24 and going to a women's support group we would laugh, I would go home with a sore face and sore sides. Why? I wasn't used to smiling or laughing. After a few months of doing that, I never have a sore face, sides, or belly from laughing as I laugh enough.
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Comments (10)
Love the title to your S M O O T H Poem!
Nice
Awww, such a sweet and romantic acrostic! I loved it!
Brilliant! I love this one, R.P.! Smooth!
Acrostics give me a warm cozy feeling like this piece - well done! ☺️
Great acrostic, wonderful smooth entry
Very etender and heartwarming. Great acrostic, RP!
Aw, a moment of sweet contentedness.
mildly hairy LOL. awwwww so sweet and I love how visceral this is!!
That is sensous, soothing, and oh so smooth. Nicely done!