Love was once
a tree in wilt, a door kept shut.
Fist to the wall,
I'd look up and find dust.
No roof, it fell
when the hand hit.
Love was once,
my gut in a roll,
as if the sea when
I'd put my eye to the dock
and in the gaps I'd see it
eddy and foam.
Now love is a palm held open,
the sun on your neck,
rain down your arm,
you lift it to keep me dry.
It is a bud ripe to turn, each tree tall.
Your hand on my hip,
a foot in the door
to toe it wide.
Now love is you
over me like skin
on bone. You
grow to me like moss
on stone.
Now eye to eye,
we peer in the gaps,
and the sea lies still.
About the Creator
Bella Nerina
Australian. Writer.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (4)
Fantastic poem!
Wonderful & edgy piece! 👏😀
Amazing. Absolutely gorgeously written. I was told there was bitterness here, and perhaps that’s true; but I'm left with hope and peace at the end. The sea still, even when peeked at warily, was just beautifully linked to the foaming from the beginning. This is a truly remarkable evocation of redemption. I do hope this places in the challenge. 👏👏👏❤️
I love this piece Bella! It’s real and relatable. I recalled my life of abuse and also of healing, through your words. Well written.