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Limbo

Do you ever just sit on the phone with someone but find you can’t find words to express yourself?

By Donna Fox (HKB)Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Limbo
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Anguish.

Pain.

Fear.

I’m wordless.

I’m breathless.

I’m blinded by grief.

I want escape.

I want this to end.

I want to go back to before.

Before I lost her.

Before she was in pain.

Before I loved her too much.

Too much to be able to live without her.

It’s not a choice…

I’m out of choices.

I’m out of energy.

I’m out of my depth.

When will this get easier?

When will this stop hurting?

When will I be done crying?

I’m tired of feeling.

I’m tired of hurting.

I’m tired of crying.

I’m tired of being without you.

I miss you more than I can express.

I don’t know how to carry on.

I don’t know how to move on.

I don’t know how to go on without you.

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About the Creator

Donna Fox (HKB)

Thank you for stopping by!! 💚💙💜🩵

If you are interested in longer works by me, I have two books published on Amazon.

Jogger's Trail and Fox in The Hole.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran11 months ago

    Gosh, this was so relatable! It felt like you had a look inside my heart and wrote this poem. I just love it so much! So emotional!

  • Thank you for reading my story. I feel for you in the excellent poem and have subscribed to your channel

  • Nikki Lynnabout a year ago

    I lost my mother-in-law a year and a half ago, and I felt this!! GREAT READ!!

  • Tina D'Angeloabout a year ago

    Donna, I worked most of my early career in Canada and I'm concerned that your work lacks the required number of "eh"s...lol

  • Jessica Bandaabout a year ago

    Very powerful, very relatable. You have me in my feelings. Great work!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Oh dear. You took my advice, now I can't keep up. Ha. Wonderful. I feel every emotion. Well done, Just spell DEPTH, you left off the h. Time heals all wounds they say. I say pain just gets buried and resurfaces here and there. But it lessens and we find the strength to fight on, it gets better, Sometimes much better.

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