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What ails me

By Donna Fox (HKB)Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash

Breathe in, breathe out

Breathe in, breathe out.

Ba-bum, ba-bum

My heart beats on.


Another sleepless night,

Laying here in mourning,

Waiting for morning.

sad poetryheartbreak

About the Creator

Donna Fox (HKB)

Thank you for stopping by!! 💚💙💜🩵

If you are interested in longer works by me, I have two books published on Amazon.

Jogger's Trail and Fox in The Hole.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    This was wayyyy too relatable! Loved your poem!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    I'm a little confused. I though poems had to be 100 words or more. Surprised they published it. Good for you. Express yourself.

  • Jessica Bandaabout a year ago

    I feel this!

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