Is It me?
Sensitive topic. Fictional characters.
Confusion upon contusions
sleepless nights and no solution
wondering why it is you're suffering under this cruel
tyranny, but you're sure it'll get better.
This can't be all there is. Surely, it'll get better
Surely, he will wake up one day and accept her
Surely, he will wake up and realise he'd oppressed
Surely, he just needs time to cool off and depress
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Time goes by and I realise nothing's changed
maybe I got it wrong. maybe I am the one to change?
maybe if I adjust he won't do it again?
maybe if I'm nicer he would be nice in turn
we can get back to how things once were and learn
to love each other again and spur
love and compassion far more than before.
I'm sure he loves me...
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She grinds and always tries to please him
damaging herself to always try and appease him
but nothing changes and she's always beneath him
consistently cruel because he knew she'd never leave him
no matter how hard he swings, she comes back to him
no matter how harsh he stings, she's right back next to him
he's living like a king and she's obviously obsessed with him
she'll never dare leave him...
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Years go on and she had been strong and immovable
she survived and fought hard in this crucible
making dinner, doing the laundry and all the usual
but today, something happened. Inexcusable.
He commented on her casserole and something cracked
inside her mind she couldn't deal with the fact
that he cleared the plate and then said "it ain't all that"
she felt the cuts and bruises flare up and react.
She went into the kitchen, eyes glazed like cataract
she took out the plates and dessert that she had packed
she opened the storage door where cleaning things were stacked
and reached in and grabbed poison for the rat.
he doesn't love me...
Today they'll both be gone. That is her final act.
About the Creator
Mohammed Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/
Comments (7)
Oh, wow! Powerfully written and emotion-packed. Good job on this one!
The powerful emotion behind this. This is really intense writing and done so well to tell the story. Well done!
Really well written, emotional. This was super powerful.
Raw, emotional and really well done.
The casserole that broke the camel’s back!
Your words paint such a vivid picture of sorrow and loss.
But why would she wanna kill herself too? Why not just him?