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Infinitesimal

Unwelcomed intruders

By Lamar WigginsPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
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Infinitesimal
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a microscopic invasion,

stealthily enters

the equation

~

dark blobs form immediately

destroying healthy bonds

repeatedly

~

unseen by the naked eye,

infiltrated systems go

awry

~

mucous membranes; first defense

chest tightens, discomfort

relents

~

thermometers climb,

inflamed chords, cold chills

amplify

~

an alien replicates unchecked,

one goal in mind —

infect

~

science names the deadly strain,

can human life remain

sustained?

~

eradication, sometimes…

origin of species

mankind?

~

the infantry unleashes a storm,

healthy cells emerge;

reborn

~

the culprit remains to be seen,

I'd introduce them all to

a vaccine

~

from a top-secret lab or a meteorite,

aliens are hidden from us

out of sight...

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Lamar Wiggins

Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.

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  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    This is great, Lamar. Really, really good.

  • Veronica Coldiron5 months ago

    Wow Lamar! How very "X-Files" of you! This is such a cool concept!!

  • Tiffany Gordon 5 months ago

    Very well done!

  • Oooo, I really love this concept that the aliens came up with the vaccines! Awesomeeee!

  • Jazzy 5 months ago

    Whew all things covid or virus give me PTSD. This was well written!

  • Hannah Moore5 months ago

    I should not have read this today - My son just tested positive and I aint feeling too clever.

  • Rob Angeli5 months ago

    Just getting over another bout of it myself right now, I'd have been happy to introduce them! Well done.

  • Jay Kantor5 months ago

    L-bud ~ aka; Mr. Less than Infinitesimal Salacious ~ Mood Swinger. J-bud

  • Mark Gagnon5 months ago

    Either the government did it or the aliens. One in the same? Well done!

  • Raymond G. Taylor5 months ago

    Brilliant!

  • Oh that was awesome great original take on the E.T. Challenge well done

  • So unique! And you taught me some new words 😉🥰

  • I predict this will go "viral".

  • That was really good. Craftily written and thought provoking. Excellent job Lamar!!!

  • Alex H Mittelman 5 months ago

    So… many… types… of germs! Great poem/story! Well written!

  • Donna Renee5 months ago

    Ooooooh yeah!! This is so great, Lamar!! Definitely lots of these kinds of aliens among us 🫣🫣

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    This was fabulous!!! Loving it!!! I am home treating a virus low grade bronchitis. Your poem reminds me of Viruses - bronchitis, COVID, and flu.

  • Ashley Lima5 months ago

    This is such a wonderful entry to the challenge! I love the rhyme scheme. So relevant and well-written. Great job, Lamar!

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