In my hands
by H. H. Lynn
In my hands,
I can hold
A thousand
Pretty things.
Hopes,
And dreams,
And promises
Held in offering.
A kiss,
A squeeze,
A soft caress,
A shiny, shiny ring.
Butterflies,
And compliments,
And magic
Sweet nothings.
But in my hands,
I also hold
So much suffering
And pain.
Clenched hands
In fists,
And grasping claws,
And angry, angry veins.
Cuts,
And cracks,
And bitter slaps,
And flightless words in chains.
The good,
The bad,
The in between
In my hands, remain.
The choice is with me
All the moments of
Each and every day–
I can use my hands to hold or simply fade away.
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This poem was inspired by the artwork/graphic I came up with, which then lead to the title. The first poem I wrote for it did not match though, and I went with something else entirely. But for some reason, I just kept coming back to this title and image over and over again. A few days of stewing, and I was finally ready to give it some concerted effort. The words just flowed then into this lovely little thing.
I hope you enjoyed this piece as much as I loved writing it :)
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Comments (14)
Incredibly, writers can effortlessly leave one piece and start on a new one, only to reconsider and revise the previous one. Like, I don't think I'm that creative 😳
This is so brilliant!!!!
Very nice images
Wow this is an awesome piece of writing. Absolutely brilliant.
Beautiful poem! I love the contrast in everything one’s hands are capable of.
I so love this poem of yours ,hearted♥️🌹
Lovely ❤️
This was absolutely stunning Heather :).thank you so much for your comments and love to my poem! I appreciate the support! I look forward to more of your creations! :) ❤️
This was just so beautiful! We can use our hands positively and negatively. It's all in our hands. A fantastic metaphor!
Awesome inspirational poem!!!
Beautiful poem.
I like the simplicity and the contrast.
Beautifully written poem!
Beautiful words in a beautiful form