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In Kindergarten's Garden

an acrostic poem

By Gina C.Published about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Eliza says,

Call my mommy, teacher, it’s a splinter,” (holding out her tiny hand...) while

Lavender and cedar seeds are strewn

In kindergarten’s garden. Sweet

Peas are planted--everything’s organic, all is new--in

Springtime, we bid farewell to winter; it’s April (yet, somehow) it’s nearly June--the

End of yet another school year; everything will blossom here, then wither all too soon.

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-Gina C. 🧚‍♀️✨

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Thank you so much for all your support! 🥹 I'm around a little less these days, but I'm still here and am still trying to read all your wonderful work when I'm able to. 🥹

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About the Creator

Gina C.

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  • Twice-published in Vocal's Moment of Freedom Collection:

My Soul of Red

Free Verse

Free-Form poet of ethereal style🧚‍♀️✨

Fantasy writer

A sucker for a good rhyme

Follow my Ghosts of Relationships' Past series:)

TT: poetry.in_pajamas

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  • Flamance @ lit.27 days ago

    Awesome story I like it congratulations 🎉🎉

  • Grz Colm28 days ago

    Love the beautiful simplicity here..beginning with a child! Terrific work Gina! Huge congrats on this wonderful poem and top story! ☺️🌄

  • Anna 29 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    I loved the opening line. It put us right there in the moment. Your poem felt like such a delightful time. Maybe not so much for Eliza, she'll survive. Congrats, Gina C.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    What a delightful acrostic!! Great work, Gina!

  • angela hepworthabout a month ago

    Aww how cute this was!!

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    Made my heart smile...love children so much

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • The Writer about a month ago

    Congratulations!!!

  • D. D. Leeabout a month ago

    I enjoyed the visuals. Congrats on Top Story!

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    This is lovely and I really liked how you formatted it. Congrats on TS.

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    You really painted such a tender picture here well done!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is so sweet. Congrats on the TS.

  • Caroline Janeabout a month ago

    Love how the smallest seeds speak of such big universal things. Lovely work. ❤️

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Welll...a different one got Top Story, but still equally fast. Congrats on this beautiful piece, Gina!

  • Ameer Bibiabout a month ago

    As a reader, I truly enjoy how this poem describes a memorable time in a kindergarten garden. It reminds me of how nice and innocent children are, and how beautiful nature is. Eliza calling for her mother, as well as the lavender and cedar seeds, let me fully imagine the event. But it also makes me sad, thinking about how fast time passes and how things come to an end. Overall, I like how the poem combines pleasant and bitter feelings, making me ponder on how priceless memories are.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Awww, this was so sweet and adorable! Loved your wonderful Acrostic!

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Brilliant & beautiful acrostic nature poem!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a month ago

    Awwwwwe, that's sweet. Did You do an experiment where You grew plants for school? I did that when I was in kindergarten. We grew beans in wet paper towels and plastic sandwich baggies. Mine grew to be the biggest. Then we took them home and planted them. My plant fit in right with the tomatoes.

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    Awww, that was so tender and sweet! Loved the imagery in this one :)

  • ROCK about a month ago

    So sweet! I adored this; I remember planting sweet peas in tiny milk cartons in 1st grade and watching them sprout and grow; I was so proud.

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