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If Feelings Were Planets

A poem about interstellar emotions

By emPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
If Feelings Were Planets
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If feelings were planets, we better pray for the skies

Unstable and too toxic for the sunlight to rise

Their atmospheres would seep outwards, choking and thick

All orbits awry, each revolution too quick

Their thoughts forming rain clouds that storm down in rage

These mountains now sunken and snow capped in beige

No oceans nor treetops, no life could survive

Because these planets themselves are viciously alive

If feelings were planets, the cosmos would shatter

All energy - so potent - and a severe lack of matter

But lucky for us, that is not what they became

They're better, they're brighter, and no two are the same

Our feelings are constellations, interlinked as they shine

They're stars not too distant and when you're patient, they align

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About the Creator

em

I’m a writer, a storyteller, a lunatic. I imagine in a parallel universe I might be a caricaturist or a botanist or somewhere asleep on the moon — but here, I am a writer, turning moments into multiverses and making homes out of them.

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    Written by em