My fury eroded.
I can't sleep at night.
Thinking about how you've changed
I strive to disregard facts.
Am I lying to myself?
_
My love, it's me.
Your sweetheart
Don't you recognize me?
Why? An abrupt change
Were we in love?
_
We've been together for so long.
You can't just walk away.
I can't just forget you or us.
We've shared so much.
It's not easy to forget.
_
I love you so much,
Yet you push me away.
Why now?
Why do you play with my heart?
It seems like a break-up.
_
Are we ending things?
Are we starting a new life?
Am I seeing unusual things?
Are you still with me?
But why?
_
I don't know if I should cry.
If I should stress
If I should smile
My head is spinning.
I feel lost in our world.
_
A break-up plays
a rhythm of sadness
all over my mind.
My brain is shattered.
I sense you gone!
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Gloria Penelope
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Interesting and delicious content. Keep posting more
Such a poignant poem! Is this based on Poppy's Prompts?
So touching. You should probably reach out to that person. I strongly encourage you to do that. You never know. People have reasons and understanding them from their perspective might make a lot of difference. I feel you. Honestly. Please reach out. 🙏
You always write about couples. Oh it is also funny!
Hi Gloria, 1 word “WOW”!!!! The raw honesty and introspective questions capture the essence of a relationship in distress, making me empathize with the pain. The lines evoke a sense of confusion and sorrow, beautifully portraying the complexities of love and loss. Keep expressing these powerful emotions through your writing. It’s super smart ! BR, Dr. Jay
Lovely, yet heartbreaking ❤️