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how the mountain disappears from the ski lift

a haiku

By sleepy draftsPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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how the mountain disappears from the ski lift
Photo by Patrick T'Kindt on Unsplash

blue hands, burning stars,

one stolen kiss in the sky

paired with fervent eyes.

love poemsnature poetry
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sleepy drafts

a sleepy 26-year-old named em :)

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  • Sonia Heidi Unruh8 days ago

    I am in awe of your storytelling! And the title launches the poem so unexpectedly yet perfectly.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Nicely done! "one stolen kiss in the sky" Powerful and moving!

  • Jason Ray Morton3 months ago

    Very descriptive work!

  • Beautifully graphic, you've painted a whole evening in 16 syllables. Thank you for sharing.

  • Michele Jones3 months ago

    Sounds like a good evening.

  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    A beautiful, romantic, stolen moment captured in words. Loved it!

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