GRADUATION DAY
Sensory Spell
Finally, Graduation Day is here.
The audience is ready to yell, scream and cheer.
Their graduate has earned a degree.
A journey meant to be.
Watching people take a seat.
recall the classes that you had to complete.
Waiting for the music to begin,
the Coliseum is filled with din.
The "Graduation March" begins to play.
Graduates are on their way.
Commencement is off to a splendid start.
Hearing the music, it touches my heart.
Seeing the green caps and gowns appear,
searching for you, don't see you and hold back a tear.
Knowing they will further their education or soon be jobseekers,
graduates listen to their commencement speakers.
Each graduate's name and degree
appears on the Jumbovision, we can see.
Hearing each graduate's name announced,
seeing, then hearing, your name pronounced.
The audience appears carefree.
On the other hand, you can't see me,
Hearing my "woohoo" cheer,
you walk the stage recognizing my voice in the crowd; you can hear.
You know that it's me and that I'm here
to celebrate your achievements this year.
After commencement, the party takes place.
Smells waft throughout the house, and there is a smile on your face.
Pizza and Jersey Mike's sets the party mood
adding cake, your favorite food.
Ice-cold bottled water quenches the thirst and tastes just right.
Before the party heads into the night,
there is a hug or two
with a few photo opportunities with you.
Unforgettable, the 12th of May,
it's Spring 2023 Graduation Day!
Writer's notes: This poem is dedicated to my grandson who graduated this month. In addition, GRADUATION DAY is submitted to Vocal's Sensational Challenge.
Of course, the "Graduation March" sometimes referred to as simply Pomp and Circumstance is a familiar and traditional processional tune played at American graduations.
In 1901, Pomp and Circumstance March #1 was written by Sir Edward Elgar, who is a British composer, and the music played at the coronation of King Edward VII. Naturally, the song is considered patriotic in the UK.
So, how did it cross the pond and become associated with American education? The song was played as a recessional in 1905 at a Yale graduation. That year, Sir Edward Elgar received an honorary doctorate from Yale. Later, the song was used as a processional song at graduations, and ever since it has become a tradition.
Thank you for reading! Your hearts and comments are appreciated!
Reference: https://www.npr.org/2003/05/27/1273081/pomp-and-circumstance#:~:text=Sir%20Edward%20Elgar%20composed%20Pomp,coronation%20of%20King%20Edward%20VII.
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (22)
Such an accomplishment. Congrats to your grandson. My son also just graduated. :) Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem!
Such a great story. We rejoice for all the graduates.
Congratulations to you grandson. And what a fitting homage from an accomplished writer such as you. You continue to inspire Babs Pauline πΈ
Nicely done, Babs.
This is so sweet, I am sure he will appreciate it π₯³π₯°
Congratulations to your grandson! Nice poem!
Wonderful Babs. I very much enjoyed reading this. You always do such a wonderful job. Congratulations to your grandson!!!
Congratulations to your grandson Babs!
Nice.
Awesomeeee! Congratulations to your grandson! I loved your poem!
Beautiful poem & great info.
Beautifully written Babs! Congratulations to your grandson!
This is such a wonderful send off and a beautiful way to say I love, support and am so proud of you
Congratulations to your Grandson! And thanks for the FYI at the end too ππ
Awesomeβ¨π
Excellent work, love this
Beautifully written and a nice lesson. I hope you print this; it will become a wonderful keepsake for your grandson!
Congratulations to your grandson! Great poem!
What a great reason to create a poem. Wonderful Babs! Interetsing history of "Pomp and Circumstance" too.
Fabulously written Babs ! Congrats 2 your grandson! π
What a grand day you display. Congratulations to your Grandson. π₯°
Wonderful!! β€οΈβ€οΈ Congratulations to your grandson!! πππ