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Gaudy Patterns

Game Changer

By KJ AartilaPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Gaudy Patterns
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Back off, I say, I’ve seen this act before

I will not play another round,

let me show you to the door.

Followed by resistant sounds -

***

you think I’ve changed the unspoke rules?

Yes, indeed, I have.

Because the key is not for you

to hold within your sweaty hands.

***

I’ve told you many secrets

to move the barrier between.

Instead, you choose the darkness,

claiming to be unseen.

***

Insisting I exist there,

within your comfort zone.

Despite your grand intentions,

I decided I have grown.

Thank you for reading! This poem may read a bit herky-jerky in parts - it’s supposed to, in my attempt to make a point. Does it work?

sad poetry
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About the Creator

KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

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  • Mabout a year ago

    I love the ending.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    yes it works. Great poem. Well done.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    "I've decided I have grown." Loved that line. Taking care of you and saying goodbye to the relationships or vices that try to keep you down. Great work!

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