a grand dream daring
no limits can stop my climb
at the peak, I’ll fly
26
Share
About the Creator
KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
My Substack
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Keep reading
More stories from KJ Aartila and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (17)
This comment has been deleted
I love the imagery, a great poem. Good luck!
I like the uplifting vibe of this <3
very inspirational <3
This is a great and moving story! 🏔
We're all chasing our dreams, in one way or another. The drive to keep pushing until we fly is what keeps us going, I think. Very nice!
Wow, the ending! So free and inspiring. Great job :)
Beautiful... I love it...!!!
A beautiful piece about overcoming adversity and pursuing dreams. Well done!
Motivational!!!
Very inspirational and uplifting!
very, very nice. Love it.
inspiring
Beautiful haiku!
A wonderful take on the challenge, great words
Fantastic, Keila 💕🙂
Love it!
Ahhh, that last line. Superb.