Fracture/Fraction
One-fifth
By Lisa HerdmanPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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Embodying one half of an eye-roll
A stunned tongue
A doughy touch
A critical development.
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I'm a burial plot in advance
A back-drawer pen
A daughter
Sometimes needed and forgotten.
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Inevitable
Discussed and disgusting
A softness due to mold
A spring cleaning.
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Maybe they'll cut the grass and leave it balding.
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Maybe your tennis hand will become twenty percent destroyed.
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Maybe one-fifth is all it takes to feel sorry for yourself.
About the Creator
Lisa Herdman
I'm learning to be wildly inappropriate, ridiculous, needy - and alive.
Thank you so much for all the support!
Comments (4)
Lisa, you always capture me with your prose or poetry.❤️
Perhaps even less. I know my eyerolls don't stop at half when I'm launching into the pit of self-pity. They roll when I think for a moment how grand I might be, then roll again fully the other direction as I berate myself for how awful I am. The randomness of our thoughts, the dichotomies & contradictions expressed without a breath in between--how you've written this is just so true to life. I could identify with every word, every line.
Oh, Lisa, this is so evocative and poignant! So many wonderful lines/phrases here, and I especially love: “I'm a burial plot in advance” … so much expressed in so few words 💕🙂
Dear Lisa ~ I often write - 'For The Kids Someday' - This may be something you may want to 'Archive' for yours, someday? Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, Cal 'Senior' Vocal Author