~~~~Faith Transformed~~~~!
~James & Oneg's Break Out Of Your Cocoon Challenge~
Here is my entry into James and Oneg's final summer writing challenge: The Break Out Of Your Cocoon Challenge!
Here is the prompt: "Butterfly poems are a genre of poetry that use the butterfly as a symbol or metaphor to explore themes such as transformation, growth, beauty, and the fleeting nature of life. Write one."
Here is a link to all of the challenges from the 2023 Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza! Feel free to join in. I'm tagging anyone who is interested! There is no deadline!
Here is my Break Out of Your Cocoon poem entitled: ~~~~Faith Transformed~~~~!
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Reading Rainbow...
reminded me...
that I could...
go twice as high...
as a Butterfly in the sky...
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The WORD taught me the reason why...
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For...
I am...
Divinely...
Anointed...
to...
soar...
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with the strength to endure...
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equipped with HIS might...
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to successfully win the fight...
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Then... one fine day...
things went from...
intangible to real...
for it was the day...
that I first felt The Creator heal...
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Eventually, my Faith...
transformed...
from putty into stone..
when I learned that I wasn't alone...
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It was then...
that I shed...
my useless cocoon of anxiety sandwiched with doubt...
and embraced HIS plan for my life...
minus the clout...
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A divinely-equipped butterfly I finally became...
My purpose and trajectory
never the same...
About the Creator
Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Comments (24)
Definitely inspirational.
This was gorgeous ππ
This was beautiful Tiffany! I'm a reading Rainbow Kid too. God I loved that show.
Oh, such an inspirational piece, Tiffany! π₯Ήβ€οΈ I really love how much you brought into this. I really felt the sense of doubt being overtaken by the healing. Wonderful! I've been on a break from Vocal, but I'll be back to catch up on more of your work soon π₯Ήβ€οΈ
Absolutely beautiful! π
Bravo π Love it π₯°
Whoaaaa Tiffy, this was just so beautiful and mesmerising! Loved this magical poem!
Moving and beautiful
Beautiful poem, Tiff. Well done.
What a beautiful piece of writing Tiffany. I love this my friend.
OMG πBig Sister πππ«ΆπΎπ€©πππ¦This is One of my Favorite π Of yourπ«΅πΎ Collection ππ―βΌοΈ
Loved reading this!
I always enjoy reading your work. The imagery of transformation, realization, and self-actualization are present in every line! Great job!!
Loved this so much Tiffany! β€οΈ π¦β€οΈπ¦β€οΈπ¦β€οΈπ¦β€οΈ You are a butterfly my friend π¦
You set the bar high with this one Tiffany! I think this is my favorite piece of yours, just outstanding!
Wow Tiffany! This is so marvelous. I think I will jump back into writing again after seeing this. I lost my motivation for a little while. Your beautiful poem has given me wings to fly. So fly lovely butterfly Tiffy. Fly............I also need to enter J & O challenges, I have been invited, now I am ready. Thank you lovely flower.
Powerful & Beautiful ... Uplifting! βοΈ
Beautiful. What a marvelous testimony to your faith & spiritual journey, Tiffany!
This is beautiful, Tiff! Fly away to better things. π
Magnificent!!! Love your uplifting & inspiring transformed poem!!!πβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Omg Geordi LeForge, Reading Rainbow :) :) Loved!
Very beautiful, and more cheery than mine!
βThe word taught me the reason whyβ yess! ππΌ
Great poem!!!!