Dreams of regeneration
going where movement is slow
The pale blue light of the full moon
makes the tears gathering in the corners of my eyes
more obvious
as I stare at pictures of us on my phone
lifeless
wanting to call you.
It's late and I've had some wine
opened a Pinot to enjoy
with the calamari we used to order together
from the Italian place on 153rd.
"Make sure they still have tentacles not just rings"
you'd insist.
Were you controlling
or just concerned that your favorite dish might change?
You never did like to feel out of control,
never did like change.
I did my best to provide stability
(or at least consistency).
Is that what you needed
or is that why you left?
I drift off to sleep,
phone in hand
your number half dialed.
Wet eyes now the size of frisbees,
I dream of being a giant squid.
Eight strong arms and two tentacles,
2,240 suction cups to hold, taste and smell you
each one with more taste receptacles than the human tongue.
Gliding through the deep blue sea,
my large eye may not catch you in the darkness,
but I will recognize you when I smell you.
I will know you when I taste you.
I will feel you when I hold you in my arms.
I glide through the water,
let the many scents of the deep flow across my arms
as I search for you.
Maybe you're hiding in a sunken shipwreck.
Maybe you've found a hidden treasure far away from me.
Maybe you will break my heart when I find you.
I know you will break my heart when I find you.
but squids have three hearts
Maybe you will resent being found,
attack me and cut off my arms.
I know you will resent me when I find you.
but squids can regenerate
Under the right circumstances
you can even chop off a squid's head
and it will grow another.
So I will continue to search for you
and I will imagine
the two of us suspended in the deep sea
together
where movement is slow
and my many arms are strong enough to hold you this time.
Where I am strong enough to hold you this time.
And the water is dense enough
for you to stay.
About the Creator
F Cade Swanson
Queer dad from Virginia now living and writing in the Pacific Northwest. Dad poems, sad poems, stories about life. Read more at fcadeswanson.com
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Comments (17)
This poem is well written! You did such amazing job of evoking emotions in the reader and making them feel the same longing and heartbreak as the protagonist.
I feel this deeply. Amazingly well done!
lovely.
This is such a beautiful, moving piece. You've touched on such difficult emotions with so much artistry and grace. Stunning <3
Wonderful images
As the poem progress I felt myself descending into the depths of emotion so poignantly expressed here. The lines and words that show the nature of the danger of our perceived experience with other people is "Were you controlling / or just concerned". When we do not get the love we expect or our wants and needs met, we tend to have a negative view of the other person's actions until we have time to reflect on what really is at the root of what is being communicated.
Pleasant 💯👍
This is eloquently written a wonderful romance poem well done :)
You really bring together the marriage of pain and beauty... thank you
You have captured something here that is so precious. There's love and heartbreak... but so much hope painted with a surreal brush! GREAT poem!
Beautiful poem! Poetry isn't typically my genre, but I loved everything about this piece :-)
Great poem - thank you!
Absolutely stunning, and evocative af! Loved this beautiful poem! Hearted and subscribed.
This was really emotional. It's been beautifully written and expressed.
I feel this piece deeply
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Great metaphor and execution here.
This feels so intense... there is some love lost here! Felt this. ❤️❤️❤️