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Drained

A Poem

By Atomic HistorianPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read

Some are willing to give their body

Others their mind

But few will risk their soul

For life has taken its toll

On us all

With its unrelenting draw

Opening its maw

To swallow us whole

As we stroll

Through a strange land

A stranger in every face

Some filled with anger

Many with fear

Turned to malice and danger

Of the unchallenged trauma

A brutal world

Truth obscured by uncertainty

In a land of plenty

Where we die of falsified scarcity

Where the rarity of love

Is held above all others

In a world that seeks to smother our true selves

Just living life

With our passion shelved

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Comments (5)

  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock12 months ago

    That constant tug of war between my passion for what I want of this life & my fear of what it might cost, exacerbated exponentially by the fact that most everyone else experience the same struggle, creating a world full of pitfalls just waiting for the opportunity to trip up & frustrate the pursuit of our hopes & dreams.

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Wonderful piece. Very well done.

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Eloquently said!!! ❤️❤️💕

  • Leslie Writes12 months ago

    Lots of bitter truths in this poem. I especially liked the lines about people dying of falsified scarcity and living with their passion on a shelf. Excellent work.

  • Lamar Wiggins12 months ago

    Absolutely loved the last line. Great work! 👏👏👏

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