If I was a baby,
I wouldn't mind the sticky crimson on my hands.
If you were my baby,
I may have been okay with your sticky smugness when I called you out.
But I'm not a baby,
and you're not my baby,
and you'll never call her baby
again.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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I watched my breath form a small white cloud as it puffed out of my lips and dissipated before my eyes. I rubbed my hands together, blowing into them with the precious bit of warm air that remained in my lungs. My leg bounced as I stared into the cold dark world beyond the windows of my truck as they remained partially fogged up.
By Donna Fox (HKB)5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (24)
wow!
Oh wow, this is intense and it has so many layers 😯
Ok this feels like it has MANY meanings depending on who’s reading it! I love it. 😍
Wow!
Powerful imagery!!!
So well done!!!!
You have written so many beautiful stories your story is admirable please visit my vocal id and read a story please
Get it Cathy! I love it!
Intriguing! Loved it!!
Such a beautiful hue of red. Too beautiful to be crushed.
I devoured this poem! My ultimate fantasy. Getting rid of her and soaking in her blood. Hehehehehehehheehhe!!
Now this tells of a bigger story. Powerful
I take it we're not talking about the beautiful blossom. Powerful & evocative of so much for me.
Yikes!!
Well, who ticked off Cathy today. Glad I am not that baby...oh baby. I guess you told them.
Powerful words Cathy.
Well this was an unexpectedly welcome punch in the gut
Oh, damn! This is something else, my friend!
So good. This is so powerful!
Super powerful!!! Love it!!!♥️♥️💕
Wow, this is a very deep and powerful message.
I would never, ever mess with you. This is a promise to whoever, I can feel that. It's making me feel angry in my gut.
Oooo this one cuts! Short and so powerful. Love it!
Oh, Cathy, I feel the pain in these words! Amazing, powerful poetry!