Like a newborn neophyte
the rain which just learned to rain everywhere with its fame under the armor of a crowd the ones who celebrate life and themselves every day because they can live this way.
One of them gleaned all the news from the environment and came across a water snail. He thought its ebullient kind of character was something to observe and stop raining over and over again.
The sun came!
and It went away
The thunderstorm arrived and blurred all the plans
another month was taken away from a snail's life
To his surprise, summer arrived and nature shifted into a fairytale life
fruits were chasing Him with smells and tastes from every side
Hurray!
He exclaimed and stopped to cry, thought changing plans wasn't that bad
accepting the facts and being flexible it's not the end of the world at least not for tonight
this time I will follow the smells and put away the travel for another wave
again and again over and over again
Don't these moments of progress feel like the best of all of the moments calm relaxed without a rush with time to be in and think over all twice
to be in the now present of each place and time uniting himself and myself in his state of love for this world no matter what
what a beautiful snail
Rain observed and started crying a river
His tears turned into all the crystal stones
I thought I should stop but it feels like I can not ..
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Darkos
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Comments (4)
This was so profound and uplifting! Loved it so muchA
It is a deep message from the rain!!
Your poem makes me feel at ease with nature, and I feel for the snail because rain can be annoying when life is in a shell!
Both beautiful and philosophical.