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An ocean between then

The heart knows what the eyes don't see

By Cheryl E PrestonPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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An ocean between then
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By the river bank she stood

Everyone said it would do no good

It's time to go they said

She couldn't get it out of her head

She sensed that he had survived

Her heart told her he was alive

She decided to take a chance

Just one more a final glance

Something inside said to turn around

Even though she heard no sound

She ran with all her might

Her gut had told her right

Feet slipping in the sand

She grabbed his outstretched hand

And pulled him to the shore

Together they would be forever more

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Cheryl E Preston

Cheryl is a widow who enjoys writing about current events, soap spoilers and baby boomer nostalgia. Tips are greatly appreciated.

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  • Joelle E🌙11 months ago

    I love the subtle beauty of this. Rhyming poems can be so underrated. Amazing work 👏🏼✨

  • The hope & prayer of everyone who has lost someone to the depths. Heck, it tends to be the hope of everyone who has lost anyone dear, no matter how the loss has come about. Sometimes prayers are answered, hopes realized.

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