A Precious Sea Maiden
A Sonnet For My Muse
This is just inspired by things that I chat about with my Muse. We both love fantasy stories and mythology, so this is sort of about both of us.
I have borrowed lines from Pink Floyd's "Echoes" and The Electric Light Orchestra's "Can't Get It Out Of My Head" and have shared two videos for them, the Pink Floyd used in the 1972 surfing film "Crystal Voyager" inside a huge curling wave.
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From Running Green Waters She Did Come
Like Aphrodite On The Half Shell
A Maiden From The Sea In The Sun
I Saw Her Beauty, In Love I Fell
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Sailing On The Surf And Through The Waves
She Is Loved By All That Come Her Way
Through Great Labyrinths Of Coral Caves
A Beautiful Princess Holding Sway
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I Love To Be In Her Sweet Presence
To Hold Her Hand And Share The Moments
To Hear Her Voice Recite Poetry
To See Her Bright Eyes Light Up For Me
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She Truly Is The Ocean's Daughter
And I'll Always Be Here For Her
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beautiful Mike makes you sometimes wonder whoβs really in that ocean, π€·π»ββοΈ π
Beautiful, as always! :)
Sweet, lovely and wonderful!
Simple ans sweet :)
Lovely poem. Well done.
Thatβs great and oddly romantic! I really like it!
Very well written and oddly romantic! I like it!