The Adventure Of Jhindiya
Jhindiya is an unknown organism
- It was a warm day since it is peak summer. Young Jhindiya was bored out of its mind in its vacations, so it summoned up the courage to meet its grandmother who lived in the middle of the wilderness. Its mother tried to warn it of the monstrous nature of the wild, but he was determined. Jhindiya headed out early morning without looking back, with a slight smile on its face. But the smile didn't last long enough for its grandma to see, a black dog with white tail stopped jhindiya in its tracks and said "jhindiya jhindiya now i am going to eat you" jhindiya being scared said the first thing that came to its mind, it said "what's the rush Mr dog let me be big and chubby by my granny's house food, you can eat me on my way back". The dog was persuaded by this offer and he let jhindiya go,snake stopped jhindiya in its tracks and said "jhindiya jhindiya now i am going to eat you" jhindiya being scared said the first thing that came to its mind, it said "what's the rush Mr snake let me be big and chubby by my granny's house food, you can eat me on my way back". The snake was persuaded by this offer and he let jhindiya go, black rabbit with red stopped jhindiya in its tracks and said "jhindiya jhindiya now i am going to eat you" jhindiya being scared said the first thing that came to its mind, it said "what's the rush Mr black rabbit let me be big and chubby by my granny's house food, you can eat me on my way back". The black rabbit with red eyes was persuaded by this offer and he let jhindiya go,. Jhindiya continued on its way until it was halted again by a lion and said "jhindiya jhindiya now i am going to eat you" jhindiya made the same offer and the lion agreed and let it go. It again stoped in its tracks multiple times by different animals incuding snake, wolf,earthwowolf, parrot,sparrow, politicians , salmon bhai , sanju baba,bankloan, etc. But it got past them by the same offer. He finally reached his destination by the end of the day. He feasted on its grandma's delicacies for a week and enjoying too much , but now it was time for it to head home. This time jhindiya was scared so it told its grandmother the tale of his journey. Its grandmother had an idea so, she packed jhindiya in a cylindrical drum with some , a cup of water, halwa, some eating stuff and rolled it straight to its home. Jhindiya in drum reached its first stop which was the earthworm who asked "drum drum have you seen jhindiya" but the drum gave no reply, suddenly a light howl came from the direction of its grandmother's house so the earthworm headed in that direction thinking it was jhindiya, then jhindiya says 'chal meri damki damk dum kiska jhindiya kiska tu'(means lets go my drum),the black dog with white tail who asked "drum drum have you seen jhindiya" but the drum gave no reply, suddenly a light howl came from the direction of its grandmother's house so the earthworm headed in that direction thinking it was jhindiya, then jhindiya says 'chal meri damki damk dum kiska jhindiya kiska tu'(means lets go my drum)
- The drum continued to roll and roll again and again. The drum got past everyanimal(dog,rabiit,snake,lion,earthworm,wolf,parrot,sparrow,politicians,salmon bhai , sanju baba, bank loan etc..) by the same technique and finally got back home safely.
- MORAL: JHINDIYA WON
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I always believed in jhindiya, i knew he would win. So relatable, reminds me of my own troubles.