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Ode to Longevity

An Ode to Longevity

By RAVI KUMARPublished 13 days ago 4 min read

In the realm where time's soft whispers flow,

Where centuries like rivers gently go,

A tale unfolds of life's enduring thread,

An ode to longevity, finely spread.

Through ages past, where ancient wisdom lies,

In echoes of the olden lullabies,

The seekers of the secret journeyed far,

Chasing the eternal, like a star.

Beneath the banyan’s sheltering embrace,

Where sages meditate and time finds grace,

They spoke of lives that spanned the endless years,

Of joy unmarred by sorrow's fleeting tears.

The alchemists with potions sought to blend

The elements of life to never end,

From dawn of youth to twilight’s tender gleam,

To hold the pulse of life's persistent dream.

In gardens where the lotus petals bloom,

Defying age, dismissing thoughts of gloom,

A secret whispered by the breeze at dawn,

That life extends beyond its final yawn.

The oak, with roots deep in the ancient earth,

Stands testament to life's renewing birth,

Its leaves, though withered, fall to nourish ground,

From death, to life’s new cycle, ever bound.

The ocean, vast and timeless, deep and wide,

Holds secrets of the ages in its tide,

A cradle where the first of life did spring,

A song of continuity to sing.

The sun, each day, ascends the eastern sky,

To kiss the world awake with golden eye,

Yet sets with promise of a new day’s light,

A dance of time, unbroken in its flight.

In every heart that beats with steady pace,

There lies the quest to touch eternity’s face,

To breathe the air of countless days to come,

To hear the endless cosmic drummer’s drum.

Yet in the yearning, wisdom finds its place,

To cherish moments, fleeting in their grace,

For longevity is not in length alone,

But in the depth of love and life well known.

The painter's brush that sweeps the canvas wide,

Creates a world where timeless dreams reside,

Each stroke a heartbeat, each color a breath,

A testament to life beyond mere death.

The poet’s pen, with ink of time and truth,

Writes verses that transcend the bounds of youth,

In every line, a fragment of the soul,

A legacy that keeps the spirit whole.

In gardens where the roses bloom anew,

Their petals kissed by morning's gentle dew,

We see the cycle of the seasons turn,

And from each ending, new beginnings learn.

The mountain peaks, eternal in their stance,

Observe the dance of life in grand expanse,

Their silent witness to the ages' flow,

A testament to all that's come and go.

In temples where the incense curls and climbs,

The prayers of millions echo through the times,

A plea for life, for health, for endless days,

A hope that through the ages always stays.

The scholar in his study, lost in thought,

Seeks wisdom that the centuries have brought,

In ancient texts and tomes of long-lost lore,

He finds the keys to open wisdom's door.

The child’s laugh, a sound of pure delight,

Carries the promise of the morning light,

In every giggle, every joyous scream,

A glimpse of life’s enduring, vibrant dream.

The elder, with their stories rich and deep,

A lifetime’s worth of memories to keep,

Shares tales that span the breadth of time's expanse,

In every word, a legacy’s dance.

Longevity is found in every touch,

In every moment cherished, loved so much,

It’s in the hearts that beat with boundless grace,

In every smile that lights up a face.

In lands where ancient rivers carve their way,

And timeless trees in forests gently sway,

The spirit of longevity takes flight,

In nature’s grand, unending, sacred rite.

For time is but a river flowing free,

And we are vessels sailing to the sea,

Embracing currents, tides that ebb and flow,

A journey where forever we may grow.

So let us raise a glass to endless years,

To lives well-lived, beyond the bounds of fears,

In every breath, in every whispered word,

The song of longevity is heard.

In dreams where endless skies above us gleam,

And stars align to light the cosmic stream,

We find that life, in all its varied forms,

Endures through tempests, calms, and raging storms.

In the mosaic of existence, bright and vast,

Each life a piece, a fragment of the past,

Together forming what we come to be,

An endless dance through vast eternity.

So as we walk through corridors of time,

With hearts aligned to life's melodious chime,

We find that longevity, true and grand,

Is etched in every touch, in every hand.

It's in the love that we so freely give,

In memories that through the ages live,

In every act of kindness, every smile,

We carve our mark on time's unending mile.

Thus, in this ode to life’s enduring song,

We find the place where we all do belong,

In every heart, in every soul’s deep core,

We live, we love, we last forevermore.

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Comments (3)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 days ago

    Hey, just wanna let you know that this is more suitable to be posted in the Poets community 😊

  • Ravi, it is brilliant. Liked it.

  • Dawnxisoul393art13 days ago

    The imagery and metaphors woven throughout the verses create a vivid tapestry, evoking a sense of timelessness and the interconnectedness of all existence. The poet beautifully captures the essence of different elements of nature, human experiences, and artistic expressions to convey the profound meaning of longevity beyond mere years. It speaks to the depth of love, the wisdom gained through the passage of time, and the imprints we leave on the world. Thanks for sharing and have a nice weekend!

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