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Kathryn the Vampire

She Would Die for Me

By KJ AartilaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Kathryn the Vampire
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Kathryn the Vampire

My sister-in-law was a vampire. She rarely appeared in the light, she lived in the basement and always wore dark glasses. Oh, and she hated me. I don’t quite know why, but she did. I know because she said so.

She died by her own recklessness and rage, bursting into ashes when a sunbeam hit her blackened heart just right, as she swooped in for a bloody bite.

My own heart still beats, skipping in the light.

Horror

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KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

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Comments (10)

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    This a wonderful, micro story . Thanks for sharing 🥰

  • Ooh, I like this story ❤️😉💯

  • Brannan K.about a year ago

    Some people are a veritable succubus of joy and positive energy. Damned them! Enjoy the light :)

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh! This is intriguing and I found that last line sooo beautiful! Love this :)

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    There are some people who I really could burst with their negative essence ❤️ Well done. Love the last line.

  • Lol, this was hilarious and awesome!

  • Sister-in-laws, always poking around for a bite to eat. (Can't actually say that's true, but it's all I could come up with.) Fun.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Ooo, so clever!! And that last line, yes!!!! Great entry, Keila :)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    oh, I see what you did there. Well done.

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    Ooooo. Harsh and satisfying story!

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