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A Wedding

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By Mark GrahamPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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bride and groom (pexels.com)

Went to a very special wedding today. It was my first grandnieces wedding day. She and her husband are perfect together. Their colors were white and shades of blue. This was a very traditional wedding from the throwing of the bouquet to the throwing of the garter. The wedding was an outside wedding and the weather was perfect. Sunny and mild even for Central Louisiana for it could have been humid or rainy or both, but it wasn't it was perfect.

Weddings are wonderful and I bet the couple wanders and

eliciting memories of younger days and future days

deciding on what now.

Dawn of two new

identities one of husband and wife

notwithstanding

gaining several memories that will last a lifetime.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Daphsamabout a month ago

    Great job writing this, weddings would inspire a poem or two!

  • Eloise Robertson about a month ago

    It was nice seeing you dig into a poem format on this one, well done.

  • “M”about a month ago

    😍

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