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Shhhhh,is someone there?

find in the old mansion

By Sajal KhalilPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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The old mansion had been abandoned for years, its once-grand halls now filled with dust and cobwebs. But when a group of friends decided to explore the mansion one Halloween night, they had no idea what horrors awaited them.

As they crept through the mansion's dark, winding corridors, they couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched. The creaking floorboards and whispering winds only added to the sense of dread that hung in the air.

It wasn't long before they stumbled upon a room that seemed to have been frozen in time. The furniture was covered in dust sheets, and the faded wallpaper hung in tatters from the walls. But what caught their eye was the old portrait that hung above the mantelpiece.

It was of a young woman, with long, flowing hair and piercing blue eyes. Her expression was cold and distant, as if she was looking straight through them. The group of friends couldn't help but feel a chill run down their spines as they stared at the portrait.

As they continued their exploration, the group found themselves in a room that seemed to be untouched by time. The furniture was pristine, as if it had been recently cleaned, and the air was filled with the scent of freshly cut flowers.

But as they walked further into the room, they saw something that made their blood run cold.

On the mantelpiece, there was another portrait. This one was of the same woman, but she looked older, and her expression was even colder than before. And beside her, there was a small, ornate box.

One of the friends couldn't resist the temptation and reached out to open the box. But as soon as they touched it, they felt a sudden jolt of electricity run through their body.

The room grew dark, and they heard a piercing scream that seemed to come from nowhere. When the lights came back on, the friends found themselves in a completely different room, one that they hadn't seen before.

It was an old laboratory, with ancient-looking equipment and jars filled with strange, murky liquids. The group could hear something moving in the shadows, but they couldn't see what it was.

As they made their way through the lab, they found themselves face to face with the woman from the portraits. But this time, she was no longer just a painting.

She was standing right in front of them, her eyes glowing with an otherworldly light. She began to speak in a language they couldn't understand, and they could feel their minds being invaded by some kind of malevolent force.

In a panic, the group of friends tried to flee, but they found themselves trapped in the mansion. The doors and windows had been sealed shut, and they were surrounded by the unrelenting darkness.

As they searched for a way out, they discovered a hidden staircase that led to a secret basement. The room was filled with books, all written in languages they didn't recognize. But what caught their eye was an old journal, written by the woman from the portraits.

In it, she described her experiments in the laboratory, using forbidden magic to create new life from dead flesh. But as her experiments grew more dangerous, she lost control, and the mansion became a prison for all those who crossed her path.

The group realized that they were now trapped in the same nightmare, and the only way to escape was to find a way to destroy the woman's dark magic.

As they searched for a way out, they heard the woman's laughter echoing through the mansion. It was a sound that would haunt them for the rest of their lives.

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Sajal Khalil

A passionate write taking her fiction mind into the tales of words in the the best possible way. Give a read you will not forget.

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  • Sajal Bint E Khalilabout a year ago

    "Very well written. Keep up the good work!"

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