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Title: The Forgotten Promise

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By Sajal KhalilPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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Once upon a time, in a small village in the heart of a dense forest, there lived a young boy named Jack. Jack was known to be a kind and honest boy, who always kept his promises. One day, while playing in the woods, Jack stumbled upon an old man sitting by a tree. The old man seemed lost and confused, and Jack felt pity for him. He approached the old man and offered to help him find his way back home. The old man gratefully accepted Jack's offer and promised to repay his kindness.

Jack guided the old man through the woods and eventually led him to his doorstep. The old man thanked Jack once again and made a promise to him. He told Jack that he would visit him every year on his birthday and bring him a gift as a token of his gratitude.

Years went by, and Jack grew up to be a responsible and successful man. He never forgot the promise the old man had made to him, and every year on his birthday, he eagerly waited for the old man's visit. But as time passed, Jack started to doubt whether the old man would ever come back. He had grown old, and it had been many years since he had last seen the old man.

One year, on Jack's 60th birthday, he decided to take a walk in the woods to clear his mind. As he walked, he stumbled upon an old man sitting by a tree, looking lost and confused, just like the old man he had met many years ago. Jack approached the old man and asked if he needed any help. To his surprise, the old man recognized him and called him by his name.

It was the same old man who had promised to visit him every year on his birthday. Jack was overjoyed to see the old man again and asked him why he had not kept his promise. The old man apologized and explained that he had fallen ill and had been bedridden for many years.

Jack forgave the old man and took him back to his home, where he took care of him until he was fully recovered. The old man was grateful to Jack for his kindness and promised to make it up to him. He told Jack that he would leave him a treasure hidden in the woods, which he could find by following a set of clues.

Jack was intrigued by the old man's words and decided to follow the clues. The clues were challenging, but Jack was determined to find the treasure. He spent many days and nights in the woods, following the clues and searching for the treasure. Finally, after weeks of searching, Jack stumbled upon a chest buried deep in the ground.

As he opened the chest, Jack was surprised to find that it was filled with gold coins and precious gems. Jack realized that the old man had kept his promise and had left him a fortune as a token of his gratitude.

Overwhelmed with emotion, Jack realized that the old man's promise had not been forgotten, and that sometimes, promises take time to be fulfilled. Jack was grateful for the old man's gift, but he knew that the greatest treasure he had received was the fulfillment of a promise made many years ago.

From that day forward, Jack never forgot the value of a promise, and he made sure to keep his promises to others, just like the old man had kept his promise to him. The forgotten promise had turned out to be the greatest lesson of Jack's life.

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Sajal Khalil

A passionate write taking her fiction mind into the tales of words in the the best possible way. Give a read you will not forget.

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