You Know All Hydration Fluids Aren’t Created Equal…Right?
Cheers to drinking the good stuff (according to whatever floats your boat)
Substandard liquids will not fill your cup
And you can pour
anything and everything
from Perrier to Prosecco
OJ latte rosé
sorrel or sangria
distilled career objectives over crushed ice
with retirement package purée toppers
fresh wardrobe pickings from concentrate
blended with ideal physique
for relationships of legend (or your money back)
laudatory accolades and achievements
steeped in hot water
add social sweetener of your choice
his/her selection tonics during sex and sue season
elixirs that may pass your lips
but not your love
your longing
life
that unseen wellspring inside
a dehydrated desperation desire on its knees
for moisture promised
meaning produced
to validate some semblance of existence
more esoteric
less 'same shit different day' routine
since you’ve checked every box
reside in exclusive zones
know someone who knows someone
sport VIP membership
plus the company car
to quench famine-ridden deprived parts of you
which haven’t seen a bona fide access route
in what feels like forever
yet the source that seats soul
exercised hellur patience
and extraordinary restraint
as you sampled every dispensed drink
life’s soda fountain had to offer
and pretended to like it
because you thought
that’s all there was
Assembly line living on repeat
But no
wait…
liquified rapture streams outta depths
without track or trace
Does more in one drop
than all the sea’s horizons put together
Sought after unbreakable connections
filled to carafe-blinging brim
I remember
you relish
the sensation
this ecstasy infusion
even before first sips
An intergalactic beverage menu selection
tantalized appeal with satisfaction guarantees
of not one space in you left unfulfilled
Essence of nirvana
preserved peace
in reservoirs beyond time
Land of everlasting spirit rivers
with slow rise to honor divinity in you
and
secure proof of trust-defying gravity
that falls backward
into greater macrocosm of self
confident
there’ll be a splash
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Comments (6)
Wow. This has such profound depth. Just wow. Just reading this feels like it amped up my spiritual frequency 🤍🙏✨ thank you
The blending of images/metaphors, weaving them so seamlessly together in such a dizzying, hypnotic way..., I don't know whether to applaud or fall over. Incredibly well woven. Bravo!
You certainly have a way with words! You've brilliantly created such vivid imageries! I loved this so much!
Awesome 👍 💯❤️📝
Quite the recipe, my friend. We thirst and thirst and thirst, but don’t identity whist will quench us
Oh wow. That's quite the metaphor. Just fantastic.