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Without a Compass

Dialogue Poetry Challenge and Randy Baker's Prompted #5 Entry

By Paul StewartPublished 9 days ago 1 min read
Without a Compass
Photo by Kyle Johnson on Unsplash

I don't have a compass

You don't need a compass

Clouds are on the horizon

The unknown can be glorious

Uncharted destinations ahead

Embrace the moment

Isolation carving the night

The quietude brings solace

I want to wake, free from the dusk

The light always follows the dark

Free from the dead charm of yesterday

Your steadfast search will bring grace

Navigating through the expanse is tough

Forget the beneath; keep the end in sight

The dancing waves of the sea make escaping...

Difficult? A breeze it was never meant to be

Miniscule I am, in the world, it all feels pointless

Miniscule maybe, but pointless? Never

The passing of dark days of the past feels distant

Though the water is wild, time spent, lessons learned grant you the tools you need

It still feels like I'm stuck, in a spot, going nowhere, the salty allure of yesterday catching me in its trap

Leaving the past behind is far from easy, but forgiveness leaves the canvas of your future blank, open to potential. Will you take it and feel the warm glow of the sun on the breeze, heralding a new horizon?

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: This is an entry to both Randy Baker's Prompted #5 and the Dialogue Poetry Challenge. Very introspective, hopefully inspirational, motivational and encouraging.

The 54 words I used from Randy's text cloud image:

  1. Light
  2. Sight
  3. Spot
  4. Peace
  5. Water
  6. Horizon
  7. Free
  8. Wild
  9. Clouds
  10. Search
  11. Passing
  12. Compass
  13. Destinations
  14. Tools
  15. Yesterday
  16. Night
  17. Charm
  18. Time
  19. Wake
  20. Days
  21. End
  22. Uncharted
  23. Quietude
  24. Dusk
  25. Dead
  26. Isolation
  27. Miniscule
  28. Unknown
  29. World
  30. Ahead
  31. Leaving
  32. Steadfast
  33. Navigating
  34. Carving
  35. Grace
  36. Salty
  37. Heralding
  38. Glow
  39. Solace
  40. Embrace
  41. Sun
  42. Nowhere
  43. Moment
  44. Expanse
  45. Catching
  46. Open
  47. Dancing
  48. Sea
  49. Canvas
  50. Beneath
  51. Escaping
  52. Glorious
  53. Waves
  54. Breeze

Here are links to both challenge pages:

artsurreal poetryStream of Consciousnesssocial commentarysad poetryperformance poetryMental HealthinspirationalFree Verse

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Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

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Comments (8)

  • Poppy 6 days ago

    This is so heart touching Paul!! It felt like a hug in the form of a poem. 'the salty allure of yesterday catching me in its trap' is a brilliant line! And I especially adored the ending!

  • Love the to and fro to take in both challenges

  • Sir freaking Paul, you freaking used 54 words!!! Whoaaaaa!!! And you combined 2 challenges! Whoaaaaaaaa!! 🤯🤯🤯🤯 "Leaving the past behind is far from easy, but forgiveness leaves the canvas of your future blank, open to potential." Hmmm, that's so deep and true. But, I struggle with forgiveness. Loved your poem so much! 🍩🥐

  • Hannah Moore9 days ago

    I missed Randy's challenge - but then I'm not keeping up with things I want to do already. Ah well, can't do it all all the time. This is so hopeful.

  • D.K. Shepard9 days ago

    Wow! Great job incorporating so many words so seamlessly and using a dialogue structure! A great entry for both challenges, Paul!

  • Joe Patterson9 days ago

    Nice work.

  • The imagery of the dancing waves of the sea symbolizes the challenges we face, acknowledging that escaping them may not be easy, but the journey itself holds its own beauty and growth. Thank you for sharing your introspective and thought-provoking piece.

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