Whole World
A nature poem
Walk along the beach,
when life gets full of clutter.
Watch the butterflies flutter.
Waltz in the sand.
Waves crashing in—
Welcome the sound.
Wireless connection is worthless
when focusing on being whole.
Wandering in the water awakens me.
Waving at the wales is so wonderful.
Waivers aren’t necessary here.
Won’t regret this experience at all.
When my world caves in,
where do I go?
Weightless in the sea on a
wooden boat.
Washing the fruits, while
worshiping the most high.
Working on myself, and
wondering why I’m so critical,
while wading in the water.
Wanting more from life.
Waiting to see the world.
About the Creator
Real Poetic
Welcome to my imagination. ✨
I write what I want, whenever I want.
Thanks for reading!
-R.P. ❤️
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Comments (7)
Damn. this was so creative. Really well done.
"Whole World: A nature poem" – Your poetic masterpiece seamlessly weaves the beauty of nature into captivating verses, allowing readers to immerse themselves in the enchanting embrace of the natural world. A true delight to the senses! 🌿🌎📜 https://vocal.media/authors/zeeshan-may
👏I really liked this introspective piece Real Poetic. I too love the ocean, just watching the waves etc, I think I’ve only seen a whale once but it was with its ‘baby’ so pretty special! ☺️ Thanks for sharing and I hope you see all the wonderful things in the world step by sure-footed step!
So many truths throughout this poem. I loved the line "Wireless connection is worthless when focusing on being whole." I agree. It shouldn't even cross someone's mind if they are serious about their focus. Very well done. Awesome read!!!
Lovely and beautiful
Love this piece from you and This Sequence is so Relatable-Working on myself, and wondering why I’m so Critical Relatable❤️
Ohhh I loved all the W words! This was spellbinding to read! ❤️🖤