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When is your Birthday

Ask me in December, Babs' unofficial Challenge.

By Karun Published 2 months ago 1 min read

Hey when is your birthday

Ask me in December

It has already past the way

I already told you

Why won't you remember?

Is that On May

I have got no good friend

They don't understand

None, give a surprise send

And this problem never tends to end

Your hurt hearts, I could mend

Now I really want to say

This time I won't forget

This entire time of the day

is all mine to spend

This way you won't regret

Don't try to heal Pretend

You have put our relationship at a distant

Happy birthday My queen, here you ascend

The delay was from the backend

Here I got the gift 'Heal send

Why was the gift so late

Ask me in December

Why was the poem written late

Ask me in December...

For Babs Unofficial Challenge

Nailed it simple, Sorry for the delay.

Bab who won the challenge?

Ask me in December...

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About the Creator


🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    You need to st up a Stripe account that way you can receive tips!

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Karun, you don't have a tip option on your story. Please get with Vocal and swipe.

  • Hahahahahah this was a fun one. Loved it!

  • This is interesting and different!!! Good work Karun!!!

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Fun and entertaining!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Esala Gunathilake2 months ago

    Wow, I liked it.

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