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WELLNESS

by Babs Iverson 2 months ago in performance poetry / inspirational / how to
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Comfort

WELLNESS
Photo by William Farlow on Unsplash

On a rainy night desire,

hot clothes and towels are taken from the dryer

The cold weather can be uncomfortable,

Yet, the Sun and fire play a part in getting comfortable.

Winter activities and weather-hungry pangs.

vendor cabins with hot soup gangs

Hearty soup feeds the body.

No need for a whisky toddy.

Food feeds the body and soul

assuring the mind and body are in control.

Comfort can't be itemized,

but with hot cacao, one can be vitalized

When headaches and stomach pains cause discomfort.

a hot water bottle or heating pad supplies much-needed comfort.

Receiving comfort from sunbathing,

stresses and worries are fading.

With heat from the fire,

one can retire.

Relax and sleep.

Wellness comfort reap.

Writer's notes: This poem is submitted to the Get Comfortable

challenge. Thank you for reading! You are appreciated.

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About the author

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Thayrile16 days ago

    Nice 😊

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    Absolutely beautiful hearted

  • E.K. Daniels2 months ago

    Lovely!

  • Denise E Lindquist2 months ago

    I felt the comfort as I read along! Thank you👍😊💕

  • This was such a warm and cosy poem!

  • Dawn Salois2 months ago

    Very warm and comforting poem!

  • Lightning Bolt2 months ago

    ❤️❤️❤️‼️‼️

  • Karin Venables2 months ago

    The comforts of everyday routines are almost always forgotten. You brought so many of them together here. I have used so many of them over myu liftetime. Well done.

  • Jason Ray Morton2 months ago

    So we’ll worded and full of comforting things we all love. Awesome!

  • Judey Kalchik2 months ago

    I like the heat and warmth of your comfort poem.

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Very comforting indeed. Well done.

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