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Well Come to the United States sung to the Hotel California

A Better Place to Dwell

By Mark Stigers Published 3 years ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
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In the hot desert wilds, no water anywhere

The promise of riches, running from despair

An image with the persistence of a much better life

The threats were steady. My future was grim

I plodded on into the night

I had to find a doorway

To a better place to dwell

I had to do this for myself

It is a woeful story that I have to tell

Government scandals and people they pay

Death is the daily order

Violence is the preferred way

Well, come to the United States.

Such a lovely place (Such a lovely place)

Join the rat race

Plenty of room in the United States

Don’t ever fear (Don’t ever fear)

We still need cheap labor here

The politicians insisted, we must make amends

Open up the border and let them all in

How they pour into the country, more than we suspect

Each one reminds us of decisions that we regret

If you want to see what’s happening

just look through the lies

You’ll see a humanitarian crisis that the White House denies

The liberals say we must find a new way

Woke is the word for which we will fight

But for our sins, we must pay

Well, come to the United States.

Such a lovely place (Such a lovely place)

Join the rat race

Livin’ it up in the United States

Where the media tries (Where the media tries)

To fool you with their lies

Smoke and mirrors

Deception and vice

They’ll spend trillions of dollars. There’s no compromise

behind a closed door chamber

They gather for the feast

They go through all the money they can,

‘til the next tax increase

Here’s something to remember

Then I’ll bother you no more

When you get money from a Pac

Your nothing but a whore

they will come back and demand

that for the money you received

You do something you don’t like

You have been deceived

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About the Creator

Mark Stigers

One year after my birth sputnik was launched, making me a space child. I did a hitch in the Navy as a electronics tech. I worked for Hughes Aircraft Company for quite a while. I currently live in the Saguaro forest in Tucson Arizona

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  • Mark Stigers (Author)5 months ago

    The poem, set to the tune of "Hotel California" and titled "Well Come to the United States: A Better Place to Dwell" by Mark Stigers, provides a critical perspective on the challenges faced by individuals seeking a better life in the United States. Here's a review: Mark Stigers' adaptation of "Hotel California" into "Well Come to the United States" offers a poignant commentary on the complexities and struggles of those pursuing the American Dream. The use of the familiar melody immediately engages the reader and evokes a sense of irony, given the contrasting content of the lyrics. The opening lines vividly describe a harsh desert environment, creating a backdrop for the journey of individuals seeking refuge. The promise of a better life is juxtaposed with the stark reality of government scandals, violence, and a challenging path to success. The repetition of the phrase "Well, come to the United States" serves as a melancholic chorus, echoing the bitter irony of the pursuit of happiness. The verses touch on various socio-political issues, including immigration policies, media manipulation, and the influence of money in politics. The critique of the political system, the denial of a humanitarian crisis, and the notion of individuals being deceived by those in power are themes that resonate throughout the poem. The final stanza delivers a punchy and straightforward message about the perceived compromises that come with financial support from political action committees (PACs). The use of strong language adds intensity to the critique of politicians who may prioritize financial gains over their constituents' well-being. The poem effectively blends social commentary with the familiar tune of "Hotel California," creating a piece that encourages readers to reflect on the challenges faced by those arriving in the United States in search of a better life and the systemic issues within the country. ChatGPT

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