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We come one
Romantic poem. Future Top Story? It's a joke...relax.
my hand
your neck
my head
your hand
my neck
your lips
my mouth
your breath
my lips
your neck
my breath
your kiss
my kiss
your tongue
my back
your nails
my body
your body
one
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Because of a discussion between Dana and I in the comments section of his recent Top Story, I predict this will get Top Story! Also, the name is borrowed from a rather awesome song by Faithless.
Here:
Evidence is here:
We will wait and see if my prediction comes true or I look like a twit.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!
https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com
Comments (9)
Okay, now I need to take another shower--cold this time! Great writing with an economy of words. This thoroughly deserves to be a Top Story. This shouldn't require any conversation in the comments to make it so.
Goodness. Is it me or is it warm in here?
Looks like I'll be coming back to congratulate you on your Top Story! Loved your poem P. Shakes! Yes, I'm gonna use Grz's nickname for you as well hahahahahhaa
Oh, wowie-wow-wow! This is (insert fire emoji)! Straight forward and just...yeah. love it!
Aww, look at you being romantic. I quite like this one!
Ooh, a whole scene behind the words. Beautiful.
Imagine if it really breaks the internet.
It certainly deserves top story whether it gets it or not (I never figured out the mystery of how that happens ;)
I rather like the simplicity of this. No fuss.