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Until forever

Oak tree

By SJ CoveyPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Until forever
Photo by Josie Weiss on Unsplash

Sturdy oak, a tree to climb.

Carve our names, 2 make u mine.

Branches protect us from the storm,

This becomes our norm.

Push our children on its swing,

What will tomorrow bring?

Scatter your ashes around it’s roots,

I discover pain which strikes me mute.

Each day I come to stand and talk,

Oh how I miss our country walks.

I cry, I weep, I cannot speak,

I’m growing tired, I’m becoming weak.

The world seems empty, a baron land,

Without you here to hold my hand.

There is nowhere else for me to go,

My hair is greying, I come to show.

Your voice in the wind, whispers to me,

I’m coming my love, coming to our tree.

Thank you for reading, I’m an awful poet so apologise to all the incredible poets out there. The mood just took me to write this. I would love if you would read some more of my stuff and tell me your thoughts. SJ

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  • Dawn Salois3 months ago

    This poem is beautiful! Just keep writing poetry, and you will develop and evolve your own style.

  • Gina C.3 months ago

    Beautiful poem! Thank you so much for sharing. :) Very emotional; loved it 🥰

  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    I loved this! From first love to the end and after. How beautiful :)

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  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Brilliant and beautiful!!! Loving it💕😊❤️💕

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Every now and then I read a poem that gets me in the feels. This is one. Beautiful, emotional piece. Well done.

  • Julie Buchy3 months ago

    Sarah, amazing!!!❤️ Filled with emotion and imagery. My mind's eye sees it all unfold from beginning to end. LOVE ❤️❤️❤️

  • C. H. Richard3 months ago

    You have some beautiful lines. I love this one, " Your voice in the wind whispers to me." Well done

  • This is purely lovely Sarah, I love the title, wonderful image and words to match it.

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